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  <title>перевод и поэзия, ru&lt;-&gt;eng eng&lt;-&gt;ru</title>
  <subtitle>root 2: the radicand.</subtitle>
  <author>
    <name>Marie Schlüssel</name>
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  <updated>2006-08-09T01:19:37Z</updated>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:6870</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2006-08-08T21:21:00</title>
    <published>2006-08-09T01:19:37Z</published>
    <updated>2006-08-09T01:19:37Z</updated>
    <content type="html">this is powerful</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:6245</id>
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    <title>The Secret Life of a Toy Piano - Andrei Senkov - TRANSLATION -</title>
    <published>2006-07-14T22:52:34Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-15T01:48:07Z</updated>
    <content type="html">Я над этим переводом еще работаю.&lt;br /&gt;I'm working on this translation right now.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a name="cutid1"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1. &lt;br /&gt;The snowflakes fell  &lt;br /&gt;with the gentle crumple&lt;br /&gt;of clumsily folded airplanes -&lt;br /&gt;in columns.&lt;br /&gt;He hurt.&lt;br /&gt;He was in pain:&lt;br /&gt;stubbly, rakish, and trembling&lt;br /&gt;like a phrase from a half-written&lt;br /&gt;poem.&lt;br /&gt;Or a key, which resonates...&lt;br /&gt;Vibrations - aerial incisions,&lt;br /&gt;preparing to become a sound.&lt;br /&gt;Etchings of the infallible and mistaken,&lt;br /&gt;of the seized and the lost,&lt;br /&gt;of the abridged and the expanded.&lt;br /&gt;Of jazz,&lt;br /&gt;the panic between inhale and exhale.&lt;br /&gt;Of sheets,&lt;br /&gt;(crushed by bodies of white&lt;br /&gt;nails),&lt;br /&gt;of a cup of hot rain for breakfast,&lt;br /&gt;of the inside of Chinese tea,&lt;br /&gt;of sugared optics.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a name="cutid2"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                        Должно между мужчинами, детьми и женщинами&lt;br /&gt;                        быть что-то, ни счастье и ни несчастье.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                                    Чеслав Милош&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      1.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Снег падал так,&lt;br /&gt;      как падают&lt;br /&gt;      неумело сделанные самолётики.&lt;br /&gt;      Колом. -&lt;br /&gt;      Ему было больно.&lt;br /&gt;      Больно было ему:&lt;br /&gt;      небритому, худому и дрожащему,&lt;br /&gt;      словно строчка из недописанного&lt;br /&gt;      стихотворения.&lt;br /&gt;      Или клавиша, которая вибрирует...&lt;br /&gt;      Вибрация - надрезы воздуха,&lt;br /&gt;      готовящегося стать звуком.&lt;br /&gt;      Надрезы о безошибочном и ошибках,&lt;br /&gt;      об охваченном и утерянном,&lt;br /&gt;      о сокращённом и увеличенном.&lt;br /&gt;      О джазе,&lt;br /&gt;      панике между вдохом и выдохом.&lt;br /&gt;      О простынях&lt;br /&gt;      (раздавленных телами белых&lt;br /&gt;      гвоздиках),&lt;br /&gt;      о завтраке чашкой горячего дождя,&lt;br /&gt;      изнанкой китайского чая,&lt;br /&gt;      фаршированной сахарной оптикой.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;b&gt;-------------ДО СЮДА ИДЕТ ПЕРЕВОД-------------------&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Об игрушечном пианино,&lt;br /&gt;      загримированном под Белое&lt;br /&gt;      кусочке дерева.&lt;br /&gt;      Об игрушечной музыке,&lt;br /&gt;      появляющейся внутри нас&lt;br /&gt;      в виде маленького,&lt;br /&gt;      только что вылупившегося, сна,&lt;br /&gt;      на плече которого сидит&lt;br /&gt;      крохотная снежинка,&lt;br /&gt;      похожая на птенца белого попугая&lt;br /&gt;      и южный полюс белой клавиатуры.&lt;br /&gt;      Надрезы о том, что из музыки можно&lt;br /&gt;      конструировать всё.&lt;br /&gt;      Зиму, остров Лесбос,&lt;br /&gt;      камешки и камушки моря,&lt;br /&gt;      50 звёзд американского флага...&lt;br /&gt;      О первом, что было создано, -&lt;br /&gt;      джазовой Конфете,&lt;br /&gt;      звучащей всхлипами, кинополовинками&lt;br /&gt;      и голосами удивлённых созвездий.&lt;br /&gt;      О том, что позже появляются Обёртка&lt;br /&gt;      для Конфеты,&lt;br /&gt;      введение в джазовый&lt;br /&gt;      Принцип Неопределённости,&lt;br /&gt;      банка с джазовой Пылью,&lt;br /&gt;      надкушенное джазовое Пирожное...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Ещё позже - Рисунок.&lt;br /&gt;      Похожий на какую-то Карту для поиска&lt;br /&gt;      утонувших в зеркалах отражений,&lt;br /&gt;      он - деревце музыкальных ветвей.&lt;br /&gt;      Веточка #1 -&lt;br /&gt;      попытка использовать насекомые звуки.&lt;br /&gt;      С мухами исполняется&lt;br /&gt;      "Сентябрь - обнажение августа",&lt;br /&gt;      в котором основа - звучание,&lt;br /&gt;      возникающее при перелёте мух&lt;br /&gt;      из сентября в август и обратно.&lt;br /&gt;      Ветвь #2 -&lt;br /&gt;      истекающее межножье разбитого стекла.&lt;br /&gt;      Ветвь #3 -&lt;br /&gt;      вполне возможная бифуркация&lt;br /&gt;      пальцев пианиста.&lt;br /&gt;      Ветвь #4 - переход в ветвь #5,&lt;br /&gt;      переплетающейся с ветвью #6,&lt;br /&gt;      которая - ветвь #4...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      2.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Снег исчез.&lt;br /&gt;      Исчезла вибрация.&lt;br /&gt;      остался пожелтевший&lt;br /&gt;      неровный листок бумаги, заполненный точками&lt;br /&gt;      различной величины&lt;br /&gt;      и странным текстом&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                  ... точки - литературные пирожки&lt;br /&gt;                      точки - вогнутые ноли&lt;br /&gt;                      точки - крохотные запачканные&lt;br /&gt;                                   луны&lt;br /&gt;                      точки - хронические запятые&lt;br /&gt;                      точки - зрачки микроцыган&lt;br /&gt;                      точки - шарики типографского&lt;br /&gt;                                   мороженого&lt;br /&gt;                      точки точки точки точки точки...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      и стихи,&lt;br /&gt;      которые на присосках&lt;br /&gt;      держались на стекле.&lt;br /&gt;      По форме они напоминали&lt;br /&gt;      яркие тропические&lt;br /&gt;      растения,&lt;br /&gt;      только очень маленькие.&lt;br /&gt;      Чьи они, эти недоношенные верлибры?&lt;br /&gt;      Эти надломленные слезинки?&lt;br /&gt;      Эти неустойчивые во времени&lt;br /&gt;      филологические пейзажи?&lt;br /&gt;      Эти волшебные истинки?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      3.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Снег в горах&lt;br /&gt;      хоронит разбившийся насмерть дождь&lt;br /&gt;      и собирает на склонах озябшие&lt;br /&gt;      стихотворения.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                  Тихо. Слышно,&lt;br /&gt;                  Как муравьи - чёрные снежинки -&lt;br /&gt;                  Вздыхают о лете.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                  Осень в горах.&lt;br /&gt;                  Туман, словно серая спелая слива,&lt;br /&gt;                  Забрызгал мне руки.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                  Не уснуть.&lt;br /&gt;                  Луна - лужица белых дождей -&lt;br /&gt;                  Над нами висит.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;                  В горах не бывает осени:&lt;br /&gt;                  Сентябрь, октябрь и ноябрь -&lt;br /&gt;                  Оранжевая зима.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      4.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Время года, когда у девочек застывают слёзы,&lt;br /&gt;      превращаясь в родинки...&lt;br /&gt;      Звучит музыка.&lt;br /&gt;      - Что это?&lt;br /&gt;      - Это? -&lt;br /&gt;        "Свирель из семи неравных тростинок",&lt;br /&gt;         подаренная Овидием.&lt;br /&gt;      А у музыкального деревца&lt;br /&gt;      появляется новая ветвь,&lt;br /&gt;      точнее - семь маленьких,&lt;br /&gt;      параллельно растущих веточек.&lt;br /&gt;      Джазовая радуга.&lt;br /&gt;      Семь волшебных наитий.&lt;br /&gt;      Семь чистых страничек.&lt;br /&gt;      Семь вытянутых жемчужин.&lt;br /&gt;      Джазовая радуга,&lt;br /&gt;      исполняющаяся на свирели&lt;br /&gt;      из семи неравных тростинок...&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      5.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Сон - это живопись лимонадом,&lt;br /&gt;      в пустом бокале из-под которого&lt;br /&gt;      сновидения и реальность&lt;br /&gt;      меняются местами.&lt;br /&gt;      Словно влюблённые в постели.&lt;br /&gt;      Сон - это восторг лимонадом.&lt;br /&gt;      Случается восторг -&lt;br /&gt;      Африка,&lt;br /&gt;      маски йоруба,&lt;br /&gt;      родом из коричневой Нигерии.&lt;br /&gt;      Эти маски -&lt;br /&gt;      непокорство рыжего воображения,&lt;br /&gt;      которое негры прячут&lt;br /&gt;      в деревянные одежды.&lt;br /&gt;      Эти маски - мебель для лиц.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Эти маски - вертикальные легенды&lt;br /&gt;      о горизонталях,&lt;br /&gt;      о женщинах с вытянутыми лицами,&lt;br /&gt;      похожими на месяц,&lt;br /&gt;      в котором 32 дня,&lt;br /&gt;      о нгангах,&lt;br /&gt;      напоминающих неизлечимые&lt;br /&gt;      горбики материи,&lt;br /&gt;      о Солнце,&lt;br /&gt;      о сказочной красоты животных&lt;br /&gt;      африканской деревни,&lt;br /&gt;      о том, как они вращаются в волшебстве,&lt;br /&gt;      пачкают постели своими осколками,&lt;br /&gt;      подчиняют сердцебиение благодати,&lt;br /&gt;      лечат вывихи у комнатных тайничков,&lt;br /&gt;      шепчут о любви к сумеркам&lt;br /&gt;      на исходе тени&lt;br /&gt;      и падают тихо.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Как слёзы в платок.&lt;br /&gt;      Как падают&lt;br /&gt;      неумело сделанные самолётики.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;            1991&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</content>
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    <title>forsaken (partially inspired by bulgakov)</title>
    <published>2006-07-14T07:12:50Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-17T12:43:21Z</updated>
    <category term="completed poems"/>
    <content type="html">The crowd may have insisted,&lt;br /&gt;clamored, even,&lt;br /&gt;but Pontius Pilate washed his hands of regret.&lt;br /&gt;He could see Golgatha faintly, misty and wretched,&lt;br /&gt;from his balcony.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Nobody mentioned that it may have rained&lt;br /&gt;that night on Golgatha,&lt;br /&gt;and it would only be natural, then, for a poor soul&lt;br /&gt;to take shelter in a cave for three days.&lt;br /&gt;It thundered like the dickens:&lt;br /&gt;yet he never told the four that loved him most&lt;br /&gt;about the crown of thorns;&lt;br /&gt;the frustration that scraped at his goodness.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He was resigned to the crucifixion,&lt;br /&gt;forsaken by the world's worst&lt;br /&gt;for thirty silver.&lt;br /&gt;His head dropped on his chest.&lt;br /&gt;He took one glaring look at the sky,&lt;br /&gt;and thanks to the mobs,&lt;br /&gt;and to Pontius Pilate,&lt;br /&gt;the wrong prisoner asked&lt;br /&gt;the right question.</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:5718</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2006-07-14T00:51:00</title>
    <published>2006-07-14T04:52:18Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-14T05:41:50Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">yet I did not know it would give you so much grief, my dear&lt;br /&gt;grieving cucumbers &amp;lt;- like como agua para chocolate!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Rainy days begin&lt;br /&gt;when a salty sunrise breaks light&lt;br /&gt;over greiving cucumbers in a bowl.&lt;br /&gt;It is never a tragedy, but always a setback:&lt;br /&gt;Cardinals, cheerful winter caps, bob like buoys in the network of tree branches.&lt;br /&gt;----&lt;br /&gt;^ this will likely never be a poem on its own BUT may be dissected as an organ donor to other poems.</content>
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    <title>optic by andrei senkov - TRANSLATION -</title>
    <published>2006-07-13T08:18:02Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-15T08:05:55Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">Глаз есть символ желания, его постоянные перемещения - движение желания.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      The eye is a symbol of desires; its shift represents the shift of desires.&lt;br /&gt;      Jean-François Lyotard&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;optic shift&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;the beginning of love:&lt;br /&gt;carefully exploring&lt;br /&gt;grabbling&lt;br /&gt;at brown labyrinths&lt;br /&gt;with salty minotaurs&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a theatre glass:&lt;br /&gt;a pane&lt;br /&gt;of glassy detail&lt;br /&gt;of plastic dramaturgy&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;rain:&lt;br /&gt;impatience&lt;br /&gt;tears&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;there&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;gauguin. his paintings:&lt;br /&gt;shrouded doors&lt;br /&gt;to&lt;br /&gt;a rectangular polynesia&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a name="cutid1"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;      Глаз есть символ желания, его постоянные перемещения - движение желания.&lt;br /&gt;      Ж.Ф.Лиотар&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;начало любви:&lt;br /&gt;осторожное путешествие&lt;br /&gt;наощупь&lt;br /&gt;в карих лабиринтах&lt;br /&gt;с&lt;br /&gt;солёными минотаврами&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;театральный бинокль:&lt;br /&gt;протяженность&lt;br /&gt;стеклянных подробностей&lt;br /&gt;пластмассовой драматургии&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;дождь:&lt;br /&gt;нетерпение&lt;br /&gt;слезы&lt;br /&gt;там&lt;br /&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;гоген. его картины:&lt;br /&gt;потайные дверцы&lt;br /&gt;в&lt;br /&gt;прямоугольную полинезию </content>
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  <entry>
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    <title>advice</title>
    <published>2006-07-13T07:30:53Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-14T07:57:09Z</updated>
    <category term="works in progress"/>
    <content type="html">The art of making butterflies&lt;br /&gt;from newspaper fillings: &lt;br /&gt;The first page is always the hardest to write. &lt;br /&gt;Names are changed to protect the blushing&lt;br /&gt;bastards.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The phone hangs up quietly and&lt;br /&gt;sleepy goodbyes find their way to the front page.&lt;br /&gt;Between us, he was always doing things like that:&lt;br /&gt;buying cigarettes just because he could,&lt;br /&gt;only to trample them into the snow.&lt;br /&gt;I bet he thought those geeeeee-hucks and cahoots were reaaaally something.&lt;br /&gt;----&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;gosh I like this one. I'll keep playing with it, but boy howdy.&lt;br /&gt;sleepy goodbyes? sloppy goodbyes?</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:4901</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2006-07-13T01:40:00</title>
    <published>2006-07-13T05:49:37Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-15T08:08:54Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">The table: her grandmother's glasses, thick&lt;br /&gt;like the biscuit crumbs and oil stains&lt;br /&gt;on the corner of the gossip rag.&lt;br /&gt;Chairs turned from the table are frozen in mid-scrape.&lt;br /&gt;If you listen, sometimes, the noises get louder, more petulant.&lt;br /&gt;But it's also true that sometimes, at night,&lt;br /&gt;when the kitchen light is left on to ward away ghosts,&lt;br /&gt;the stairs creak under the weight of the people.&lt;br /&gt;And pots, shifting quietly in the darkness&lt;br /&gt;of a cupboard, patiently clang.&lt;br /&gt;Silent white moths powder the windows and doors, while&lt;br /&gt;outside, it rains, the moon imploring through the occasional wounded cloud.&lt;br /&gt;---&lt;br /&gt;add more here&lt;br /&gt;god this is terrible.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;this poem came on thick and sluggish</content>
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    <title>141421 @ 2006-07-12T03:52:00</title>
    <published>2006-07-12T07:54:29Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-12T07:58:32Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">Ach mein gott. I'm back. Aaaand I have a poem, which I stole from my other LJ, but no one will ever find out what it is.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;...unless they run a Google search.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Chiltonella, hampsonellus, sandersiella,&lt;br /&gt;Enantiopoda, hutchinsoniella.&lt;br /&gt;These are the arthropods I find unobtrusive:&lt;br /&gt;The rest better make themselves really elusive.&lt;br /&gt;Large ants, for example, should all up and die,&lt;br /&gt;Or depart to where other conditions apply.&lt;br /&gt;-&lt;br /&gt;And playing with words.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;a yemeni yeti&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A yeti yesterday&lt;br /&gt;a yemeni yahoo&lt;br /&gt;yesterday's yemenis&lt;br /&gt;yesterday's yeti venison&lt;br /&gt;yesterday's lamenting yemeni yetis&lt;br /&gt;yes, a yeti&lt;br /&gt;your yeti, yes.&lt;br /&gt;Yikes, a yeti!&lt;br /&gt;Yikes, a yemeni!&lt;br /&gt;Yikes, a yemeni yeti!&lt;br /&gt;Yet a yemeni yeti yak yak yak *yank*...blabbering Bigfoot.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:4513</id>
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    <title>the news</title>
    <published>2006-01-16T23:07:08Z</published>
    <updated>2006-01-16T23:07:08Z</updated>
    <content type="html">names are never changed to protect the innocent or not so much blushing bastards</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:4254</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2006-01-15T23:50:00</title>
    <published>2006-01-16T04:52:19Z</published>
    <updated>2006-01-16T04:52:19Z</updated>
    <content type="html">A kiss on the cheek was unsatisfying.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I wanted a make-out session.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;There. I said it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Oh, and now I have time to write for fun again, so I'm back. I hope none of the communities have kicked me out for inactivity.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:3902</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-12-04T15:42:00</title>
    <published>2005-12-04T20:43:19Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-04T20:43:19Z</updated>
    <content type="html">Red dress regress.&lt;br /&gt;Redress red dresses.&lt;br /&gt;Red dress red dress. Don't fret. It will pass.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;---&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have no idea. I feel like I'm shitting out poetry.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:3702</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-12-04T14:17:00</title>
    <published>2005-12-04T19:18:14Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-04T19:22:14Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">the blue girl and i looked at one another and made butterflies&lt;br /&gt;i caught them with a net and stuck them with pins?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;^no, i promise it won't suck this much, just playing with it</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:3535</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-12-02T19:47:00</title>
    <published>2005-12-03T00:48:01Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-03T00:48:01Z</updated>
    <content type="html">I showed my English teacher "the accident."&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;she did not like it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;balls.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:2435</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-12-01T22:35:00</title>
    <published>2005-12-02T03:35:57Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-02T03:35:57Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">another snippet. damn.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;the phone hangs up. quietly,&lt;br /&gt;sleepy goodbyes find their way to the front page.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:2204</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-12-01T15:52:00</title>
    <published>2005-12-01T20:53:20Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-01T21:01:40Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">i want stuff to translate and the last two poems seem forced. these sentiments are unrelated.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;happy the end of hurricane season.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;---&lt;br /&gt;snippets&lt;br /&gt;---&lt;br /&gt;-sleepy goodbyes find their way onto the front page of the newspaper&lt;br /&gt;how&lt;br /&gt;---&lt;br /&gt;(sonorous)?</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:1922</id>
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    <title>snippets</title>
    <published>2005-12-01T20:23:54Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-02T06:03:57Z</updated>
    <category term="completed poems"/>
    <content type="html">"The Accident"&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He made a spectacle of himself.&lt;br /&gt;Tomato sauce splattered down his shirt and red cheeks,&lt;br /&gt;the mozzarella complexion &lt;i&gt;quite&lt;/i&gt; uncouth.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We laughed softly and covered our mouths, &lt;br /&gt;red-faced and ruthless,&lt;br /&gt;mouthing impeccable platitudes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a name="cutid1"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;--&lt;br /&gt;this is the original; i left deleterious in there because it sounded pretentious enough to fit the mood but too long to flow smoothly.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;He made a spectacle of himself.&lt;br /&gt;Tomato sauce splattered down his shirt&lt;br /&gt;and red cheeks,&lt;br /&gt;the mozarrella pigmentation &lt;i&gt;quite&lt;/i&gt; &lt;del&gt;deleterious&lt;/del&gt; uncouth.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We laughed softly and covered our mouths, &lt;br /&gt;red-faced and ruthless,&lt;br /&gt;mouthing impeccable platitudes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;(edit: deleterious -&amp;gt; uncouth. I wanted to see what it looked like with both.)&amp;lt;/lj-cut&amp;quot;</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:1683</id>
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    <title>the reck'ning</title>
    <published>2005-12-01T20:19:49Z</published>
    <updated>2006-07-14T07:59:56Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">It is two minutes past pi o'clock. I shat out a poem.&lt;br /&gt;--&lt;br /&gt;The Reck'ning&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Phil&lt;br /&gt;and &lt;br /&gt;Tom&lt;br /&gt;met in the dead of winter&lt;br /&gt;at a dreary, civilized gas station.&lt;br /&gt;Their bellies bulged like big, friendly beach balls.&lt;br /&gt;Shuffling around each other,&lt;br /&gt;they exchanged pard'ns and a coupla reck'ns&lt;br /&gt;and awkward sideways glances&lt;br /&gt;at soggy bags of miscellany lined against the wall&lt;br /&gt;like dissidents.&lt;br /&gt;Phil and Tom spouted teck'ns that driving's dangerous today,&lt;br /&gt;on account of, uh, the snow.&lt;br /&gt;The slush, too.&lt;br /&gt;Looked like icy rain later, too. Maybe.&lt;br /&gt;I reck'n. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;You know, &lt;br /&gt;you really shouldn't be driving out &lt;br /&gt;in alla this weather. Come in?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Uh. Uh.&lt;br /&gt;Looka, pard'n. But I really gotta get going. Gotta get back to my&lt;br /&gt;dog, dinner, and wife.&lt;br /&gt;Still.&lt;br /&gt;Nice talkin' to ya. You take care now,&lt;br /&gt;and watch for that snow.&lt;br /&gt;Slush, too.&lt;br /&gt;Icy rain, maybe.&lt;br /&gt;I reck'n.</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:1337</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-11-30T16:58:00</title>
    <published>2005-11-30T22:00:39Z</published>
    <updated>2005-11-30T22:00:39Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">I'm going to enter one of these poems into the Kenyon Review contest.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;obligatory poem-building&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;he buys cowboy boots and tramples ciggies into the snow&lt;br /&gt;i bet he thought those geeeeeeeeeeee-hucks and cahoots were reeeeaaalllly something.</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:1146</id>
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    <title>Degas at the Harvard Galleries</title>
    <published>2005-11-28T08:09:35Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-02T05:52:34Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">Degas at the Harvard Galleries&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;he gave of the same vague elegance to horses (thoroughbreds) pretty,&lt;br /&gt;women and boys crawling through brown paper.&lt;br /&gt;For example, Miss Julie Burtey resembles&lt;br /&gt;one of Raphael's architectural wonders, the way they always concede to softness towards the middle but are &lt;br /&gt;defined along the edges, and one could say the haughty young woman blossomed out&lt;br /&gt;of the yellow paper in her bluebell dress with petals of folds and bows but none so obnoxious. If only her&lt;br /&gt;beak were not so nosy.&lt;br /&gt;Excuse me.&lt;br /&gt;On either side of her he loved the grizzly old men whose baudy uniqueness he could only capture through angle rotations&lt;br /&gt;and broad, cuddly pencil strokes. I bet when he laughed, eggs came flying merrily&lt;br /&gt;out of his mouth into his beard at breakfast.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Degas wrote sonnets. And I suppose Shakespeare, too must have doodled&lt;br /&gt;on occasion sometimes, in the margins and his pens had, anxiously, teeth marks. (Though in art, one must trust more,&lt;br /&gt;I suppose, and fanaticize less.)&lt;br /&gt;"Reproduce only what has struck you," they are said to have said he is said to have said. &lt;br /&gt;I would not fancy being stricken by a bronze ballerina,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;her toes pointed out like Achilles in battle, &lt;br /&gt;nothing so sad and stately as a falling leaf.</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:869</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-11-28T02:51:00</title>
    <published>2005-11-28T07:52:28Z</published>
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    <content type="html">i bet he thought those geeeee-hucks and cahoots were reeeeeeaaally something.</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:713</id>
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    <title>141421 @ 2005-07-31T14:28:00</title>
    <published>2005-07-31T18:29:02Z</published>
    <updated>2005-07-31T18:29:02Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">..maxims debase profundity&lt;br /&gt;and puppies howl and flinch in their sleep.</content>
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    <id>urn:lj:livejournal.com:atom1:141421:473</id>
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    <title>Walden Pond</title>
    <published>2005-07-31T18:24:23Z</published>
    <updated>2005-12-02T05:53:00Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">The man&lt;br /&gt;who sings like a goldfish&lt;br /&gt;in the middle of Walden Pond bade me have&lt;br /&gt;a beautiful day&lt;br /&gt;and I did 20&lt;br /&gt;miles or just under the sleep-blurred July shadow only halfheartedly harbors the sun&lt;br /&gt;shown over Walden pond at times just like I wanted an unassuming&lt;br /&gt;young man who would notice my book of Longley's poetry you rip&lt;br /&gt;and gnash and tear apart into juicy delicious pre-packaged pieces of poetry jerky&lt;br /&gt;and,slurping each succulent mouthful of morsels, swallow&lt;br /&gt;s eat waterbugs (or I thought they did -&lt;br /&gt;maybe they swoop down for the thrill of confusing&lt;br /&gt;porch amateur Audubons) of which I didn't remember there being this many of &lt;br /&gt;them last time...</content>
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